Writer’s Corner Guest Posts
The Writer’s Corner is a collection of guest posts from established authors who have been kind enough to share their thoughts about writing and selling fiction.
As time permits, I will be moving these over from the old blog.
Currently on this website:
My Posts about Writing
I’ve started a Writing Pitfalls article series, which will cover many of the things I have learned not to do when writing fiction. In each article, I include definitions and links to sources who probably know more about writing than I do.
As of now, there is only one article: Writing Pitfall #1: Excessive Passive Voice
From time to time, I find writing resources I want to share with our readers.
Rather than make separate pages for lots of different categories of resources, I’m going to put them here.
I also have some posts from our old blog I don’t plan to completely redo. Instead, I plan to pick out the important or interesting parts to add to this page. The grammar tips are an example of this. They used to be posts on booksthathook.com, but they are gone now. Instead of reposting them on this new blog, I’m just putting them on this writing resources page.
Tip: That vs. Which
You use that when the information is necessary for the sentence to have the correct meaning. Which is used for extra information.
The tree that the hurricane ripped up lay on the roof. Without “that the hurricane ripped up,” we would wonder how the tree could be laying on the roof. That’s why I used that instead of which.
My favorite tree, which is twenty years old, grows in the front yard next to the mailbox. In this example, it’s probably not necessary for the reader to know the age of the tree. So, I used which instead of that.
Tip: Who vs. Whom
Who is used as the subject of a verb. Whom is used as the object of a verb. Another way to think about it is: can you replace the word with he/she? If you can, then you use who, not whom.
Who is the dog’s owner? I would answer, “He is the dog’s owner.” So, who is correct.
To whom is she speaking? I would answer, “She is speaking to him.” So, whom is correct.
The girl who painted the graffiti was arrested this morning. This could be rephrased to: She painted the graffiti and was arrested this morning. That’s why who works instead of whom.
The girl, for whom the cops were looking, hid in the park. This could be rephrased to: The cops were looking for her, while she was hiding in the park. Therefore, it makes sense to use whom.
More resources coming soon!